HW 6.28
학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion, location and environment are important for a meeting. It would be difficult for people to discuss in a noisy place. For me, it\'s not easy to listen to what people say in the loud environment. I prefer a quiet place to discuss.
I also think that we can know atmosphere seeing the meeting place. If it will be held at a cafe, it would be light, casual meeting, but if it will be held at boss\'s room, we should be ready for the future.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름] [이름]!
The meeting place is most frequently a location where everyone in the team can comfortably and condusively meet due to the proximity of every member to the place. Nevertheless, if it is not about proximity, it is a preference of the group or the company.
It is true what you said that the meeting place may affect the process. Inside the boss\'s office is a make or break. So make sure when that time comes, you will be promoted and not the other way around.
There are very few mistakes here on your answer. Read carefully and understand the grammar rules governing them.
Great job! See you in class again tomorrow.
-T. Donna~
>>> In my opinion, location and environment are important for a meeting. It would be difficult for people to discuss in a noisy place. For me, it\'s not easy to listen to what people say in a loud environment. I prefer a quiet place to discuss.
I also think that we can know atmosphere seeing the meeting place. If it will be held at a cafe, it would be light, casual meeting, but if it will be held at boss\'s room, we should be ready for the future.
>>> I also think that we can know the atmosphere seeing the meeting place. If it will be held at a cafe, it would be a light, casual meeting, but if it would be held at the boss\'s room, we should be ready for the future.
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