HW 6.29
학생이 쓴 원문
What I made a hard choice this year was to choose six major subjects and a non major course this semester. It was too hard to take all courses with two clubs. I couldn\'t take courses a lot because when I went to Hiroshima, I only took two major subjects. And the grade being got as an exchange student was not added in my whole grade. So, I chosen tough semester. Final grades are being released now. It\'s been well so far, so I \'m feeling happy.
Two courses that I\'m taking in this vacation are easy relatively, so I feel comfortable a little.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름] [이름]!
After last semester, you can take on any difficult combinations of major and non-major subjects because you even have English classes. The harder the training, the better you become.
Congratulations for surviving unscathed! You made wise decisions and now, you can be laid back and enjoy spare time with yourself or with your friends.
Take note of the correct arrangements of words in a sentence (syntax). This is an indication of the sophisticated your level in English. Visit all the grammar suggestions as usual.
Very good! See you.
-T. Donna~
>>> A hard choice I made this year was to choose six major subjects and a non-major course this semester. It was too hard to take all courses with two clubs. I couldn\'t take the courses a lot because when I went to Hiroshima, I only took two major subjects. The grade as an exchange student was not added in my whole grade. So, I chose a tough semester. Final grades are being released now. It\'s been well so far, so I \'m feeling happy.
Two courses that I\'m taking in this vacation are easy relatively, so I feel comfortable a little.
Two courses that I\'m taking in this vacation are easy relatively, so I feel comfortable a little.
>>> The two courses that I\'m taking in this vacation are relatively easy, so I feel comfortable a little.
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