HW 6.8
학생이 쓴 원문
I bought one blue jean one year ago, and I think it\'s the best finding as shopping ever. I really like this jean because it has perfect line as a wide pants, and it come down until my shoe\'s middle. It\'s kind of thick, but it\'s fine to wear in summer, I mean, it\'s four season pants.
The color is not much bright, and not much dark, so it\'s fit in any top shirts and jacket.
I almost wore this jean when I was in Japan, so I felt kind of shy when uploading my picture on Instagram, because I wore a lot.
I also bought new black one and kaki one in the same store where I bought blue jean. I really like this store. It\'s better any brand stores.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] [이름]!
When we purchase a great find, we wear it until we lose the feeling that we cannot get enough of it. I know how you feel about the jeans -it\'s comfort, texture, style, and many other features. So, how is this jeans lately? Wear it until it wears out.
Show the photo to me in class when you can.
The word \"jeans\" is singular and plural. Most of the time, \"jeans\" is the best to use as a noun.
Your composition is very interesting to read. Thank you for sincerely answering the question. Excellent job!
See you.
-T. Donna~
The color is not much bright, and not much dark, so it\'s fit in any top shirts and jacket.
>>> I bought one blue jeans one year ago, and I think it\'s the best find from shopping ever. I really like this jeans because it has perfect line as a wide pants, and it comes down until my shoe\'s middle. It\'s kind of thick, but it\'s fine to wear in summer, I mean, it\'s a four-season pants.
The color is not too bright, and not too dark, so it fits in any top shirts and jackets.
I almost wore this jean when I was in Japan, so I felt kind of shy when uploading my picture on Instagram, because I wore a lot.
I also bought new black one and kaki one in the same store where I bought blue jean. I really like this store. It\'s better any brand stores.
The color is not too bright, and not too dark, so it fits in any top shirts and jackets.
I almost wore this jean when I was in Japan, so I felt kind of shy when uploading my picture on Instagram, because I wore a lot.
I also bought new black one and kaki one in the same store where I bought blue jean. I really like this store. It\'s better any brand stores.
>>> I almost wore this jeans when I was in Japan, so I felt kind of shy uploading my picture on Instagram, because I wore it a lot.
I also bought new black ones and a khaki one in the same store where I bought the blue jeans. I really like this store. It\'s better any brand stores.파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.