HW 7.14
학생이 쓴 원문
We can maker our body shape look better through clothes. I prefer wearing long shirts because they make my shoulders wider than t-shirts. Wearing shoes in the same color as pants can also make my legs look longer.
I think wearing well in formal situations is also an important ability. I heard that we should wear normal color clothes in somebody\'s wedding. Without a good sense of fashion, it can be difficult to wear for TPO.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름] [이름]!
I think you are well adept in fashion since you know too well what colors, sizes, and shapes best suits you especially in special occasions such as weddings and other events.
For the grammar pointers, since you used TPO or time, place, and occasion, you have to mention the words first before its abbreviation. overall, your answer was clear and on point. Good job!
See you tomorrow.
-T. Donna~
>> Correct! Very good sentences!
I think wearing well in formal situations is also an important ability. I heard that we should wear normal color clothes in somebody\'s wedding. Without a good sense of fashion, it can be difficult to wear for TPO.
I think wearing well in formal situations is also an important ability. I heard that we should wear normal color clothes in somebody\'s wedding. Without a good sense of fashion, it can be difficult to wear for TPO.
>> I think wearing clothes well in formal situations is also an important ability. I heard that we should wear normal color clothes in somebody\'s wedding. Without a good sense of fashion, it can be difficult to wear for the right TPO.
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