HW 7.21
학생이 쓴 원문
I believe that time can heal the pain of a failed relationship. Not only failed relationship, time can help us forget painful memories.
I also think that drinking can help. It makes me fall asleep faster and sleep deeply. I know it’s a bad habit, but when I have some painful memory, I can’t sleep well. That’s the reason why I sometimes drink to help fall asleep.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름] [이름]!
I agree absolutely that only time can heal all wounds. Along the way, we go through some processes such as drinking to fall asleep, weeping in front of friends, making uncalculated decisions, among other illogical others. These are natural.
You did an excellent job in writing your homework answer! Congratulations on all correct sentences and well organized ideas.
See you.
-T. Donna~
>> Correct! Very good sentences!
I also think that drinking can help. It makes me fall asleep faster and sleep deeply. I know it’s a bad habit, but when I have some painful memory, I can’t sleep well. That’s the reason why I sometimes drink to help fall asleep.
>> Correct! Very good sentences!
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