HW 7.23
학생이 쓴 원문
I tend to lose my interest when everyone knows and enjoys. In Korea, we call this \"the Hongdae disease\". It comes from the tend people want to lead trend. I\'m not influencer, and I know I also follow some trend, fashion, sports, and public opinions. But in fashion, I\'m changing my fashion when almost people start wearing the same style. I also enjoy cheering for underdog teams rather than the most popular teams.
And I tend to lose my interest when I get a bad result about it. For example, I had an interest about programming, but I ended up to lose my interest when I only got B+ grade from all of programming courses.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름] [이름]!
Being trendy is a human phenomenon where people follow fashion, expressions, and all things work mimicking even without knowing the reason why they do it. This is common in high school and young adults as they search for their identity.
Soon, you will have an epiphany of what you would like to truly become in the future. For now, enjoy the trends and your bespoke fashion.
Find out the correct grammar forms of the underlined words or phrases below and ask about them in class if you will. Well done!
See you later.
-T. Donna~
>> I tend to lose my interest when everyone knows and enjoys. In Korea, we call this \"the Hongdae disease\". It comes from the tendency of people to want/ wanting to lead a trend. I\'m not an influencer, and I know I also follow some trends, fashion, sports, and public opinions. But in fashion, I\'m changing my fashion when almost all people start wearing the same style. I also enjoy cheering for underdog teams rather than the most popular teams.
And I tend to lose my interest when I get a bad result about it. For example, I had an interest about programming, but I ended up to lose my interest when I only got B+ grade from all of programming courses.
And I tend to lose my interest when I get a bad result about it. For example, I had an interest about programming, but I ended up to lose my interest when I only got B+ grade from all of programming courses.
>> And I tend to lose my interest when I get a bad result about it. For example, I had an interest about programming, but I ended up losing my interest when I only got a B+ grade from all of programming courses.
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