HW 7.7
학생이 쓴 원문
I can say my speaking level is very low. I tend to be nervous when being interviewed. I often rub my knees, my cheeks get red, and my mouth get dry. I know that those acting are bad, so I become much nervous.
I want to improve my speech skill so I decide to join a speech academic after vacation classes. My goal is to make my voice much better. I believe that if I will remove the bad habits that lower my confidence, I can become a better speaker and interviewee.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] [이름]!
By eliminating your speech hindrances and you are upscaling your confidence. The calmer you are, the better you become in listening, organizing your thoughts, speaking correctly in an interview.
Of course, the first few minutes will truly be nerve-wracking but as the interview progresses, you will nail it. This is your future self if you do your best in training today.
Look closely at the grammar suggestions underlined in red marks and master their correct forms. Well done!
See you.
-T. Donna~
>> I can say my speaking level is very low. I tend to be nervous when being interviewed. I often rub my knees, my cheeks get red, and my mouth get dry. I know that those actions are bad, so I become much nervous.
I want to improve my speech skill so I decide to join a speech academic after vacation classes. My goal is to make my voice much better. I believe that if I will remove the bad habits that lower my confidence, I can become a better speaker and interviewee.
>> I want to improve my speech skills so I decided to join a speech academy after vacation classes. My goal is to make my voice much better. I believe that if I will remove the bad habits that lower my confidence, I can become a better speaker and interviewee.
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