HW 7.9
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to buy a sedan in the future. I\'ve not interested in a dream car, and it\'s not changed yet. If I have enough money to buy a car of foreign brands, I\'ll buy one of them. If I don\'t have a lot of money, I\'ll just buy a domestic car, such like SAMSUNG, KIA, HUYNDAI\'s car.
I don\'t want to buy some electric car, because they look ugly for me. And it\'s too silent, so it\'s dangerous for passengers. I don\'t like this.
If I would get a job in Japan, I\'ll buy a TOYOTA\'s car, because there are many car service centers in Japan.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름] [이름]!
Even wealthy people nowadays drive a decent car whish is not necessarily their dream car. That way, they travel safer by blending in with common people.
If you have the money soon to drive your own car, choosing the brand within your budget may be the most logical thing to do. If you work in Japan, I agree that Toyota is the best in efficiency. Most car owners in the Philippines drive this car due to its durability and reliability.
You may rethink about electric cars when gas prices jacks up again. ^^
Thank you for this homework. Please take note of the correct past participle forms of verbs as well as adjective nouns. Well done!
Catch you in class.
-T. Donna~
>>> I want to buy a sedan in the future. I\'ve not been interested in a dream car, and it has not changed yet. If I have enough money to buy a car of foreign brands, I\'ll buy one of them. If I don\'t have a lot of money, I\'ll just buy a domestic car, such like SAMSUNG, KIA, or HUYNDAI\'s car.
I don\'t want to buy some electric car, because they look ugly for me. And it\'s too silent, so it\'s dangerous for passengers. I don\'t like this.
>>> Correct! Very good sentences!
If I would get a job in Japan, I\'ll buy a TOYOTA\'s car, because there are many car service centers in Japan.
>>> If I would get a job in Japan, I\'ll buy a TOYOTA car, because there are many car service centers in Japan.
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