i learned about amusment [이름]

2017-03-27 · 첨삭 강사 Rain

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i learned about amusment [이름] today,i can't take a pirate ship Today's acitivity was very fun,Thank you teacher good bye!

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! I had fun having classes with you, you are so active and enthusiastic! Keep it up! You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great. ^_^ Have a good day and take care! Here are my corrections for you:

~T. Rain


1. i learned about amusment [이름] today,

>> Today, I learned about amusement [이름].

2. i can\'t take a pirate ship

>> I can\'t take to ride a pirate ship.

3. Today\'s activity was very fun.

>> CORRECT

OR>> I had so much fun in today\'s activity.

4. Thank you teacher goodbye!

>>Thank you Teacher and goodbye!

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