I want to amazing happen in my life.[Park [이름]] :)

2020-04-15 · 첨삭 강사 Oneil

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I want to amazing happen in my life. hehe >o< It\'s because I didn\'t have amazing happen these day So I\'m little to be bored I want to ASK!! Do you think you will corona virus exter[이름]ates in this year? a No no someday? I think coronavirus not ends How about you think? do you think you will corona virus exter[이름]ates someday? Please say in the class !! Thanks!!

강사 첨삭

Thank you Parker!! ^^

I want to amazing happen in my life. hehe >o<
>> I want an amazing adventure to happen in my life. hehe >o<

It\'s because I didn\'t have amazing happen these day
>> It\'s because I didn\'t have an amazing adventure these days.

So I\'m little to be bored
>> That is why I am a little bored.

I want to ASK!!
>> I want to ask you something.

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