ideal balance
학생이 쓴 원문
It is difficult for us to decide which is idealbalance point in parenting.
That reason is very simple because every child is difficult personality, aptitude and DNA.
So parents\' parenting belief and attitude are important.
Parents\' values make their children value and vision of life .
Independent parents raise their children indenpently.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름]!
I agree with you. Parents have a great influence on their children\'s lives. Our personality reflects on them, like creating your little version or so-called \"mini me.\" Thank you for this!
Aki~
It is difficult for us to decide which is idealbalance point in parenting.
>>> It is difficult for us to decide on the ideal balance point in parenting.
That reason is very simple because every child is difficult personality, aptitude and DNA.
>>> CORRECT!
So parents\' parenting belief and attitude are important.
>>> So parents\' parenting beliefs and attitudes are important.
Parents\' values make their children value and vision of life.
>>> CORRECT!
Independent parents raise their children indenpently.
>>> Independent parents raise their children independently.
>>> Independent parents raise independent children.
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