If I were a kid for one day?
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When I was a kid, I always wanted to be an adult quickly. Everything related to adults looked nice in my little eyes. I thought I wouldn\'t listen to nagging about my behaviors, I would do everything I want to do and I could live alone without my siblings in peace.(we used to fight and argue almost every day as we grew up.) So I\'ve never thought about that if I were a kid or gone back to my childhood. But let\'s squeeze my childhood memories, so I came up with the fairy tail Thumbelina. I was reading my book sitting on the chair in my yard, there were flowers and leaves which were Thumbelina was hiding. I felt there must be the princess in the flower or leaf. I read the book out loud so she could listen to the story, and then I lifted up every petal and leaf, I couldn\'t find her, of course. I guess if I were a kid for one day, I would do the same thing like this, and ask my mom \"Have you seen Thumbelina, how can I find her?\"
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HI!
Thank you [이름] for sending your homework. You did a great job expressing your childhood memories and imagination. Your story about Thumbelina was very cute and creative. ^^ Anyway, I also have fixed some sentences to make them clearer.
~ Teacher Gina
When I was a kid, I always wanted to be an adult quickly.
>> CORRECT.
Everything related to adults looked nice in my little eyes.
>> CORRECT.
I thought I wouldn\'t listen to nagging about my behaviors, I would do everything I want to do and I could live alone without my siblings in peace.(we used to fight and argue almost every day as we grew up.)
>> I thought I wouldn’t have to listen to nagging about my behavior, I could do whatever I wanted, and I could live alone in peace without my siblings.
So I\'ve never thought about that if I were a kid or gone back to my childhood.
>> So I have never thought about being a kid again or going back to my childhood.
But let\'s squeeze my childhood memories, so I came up with the fairy tail Thumbelina.
>> But if I try to recall or squeeze my childhood memories, I think of the fairy tale Thumbelina.
I was reading my book sitting on the chair in my yard, there were flowers and leaves which were Thumbelina was hiding.
>> I was reading a book while sitting on a chair in my yard, where there were flowers and leaves where I imagined Thumbelina might be hiding.
I felt there must be the princess in the flower or leaf.
>> I felt the princess must be inside the flowers or leaves.
I read the book out loud so she could listen to the story, and then I lifted up every petal and leaf, I couldn\'t find her, of course.
>> CORRECT.
I guess if I were a kid for one day, I would do the same thing like this, and ask my mom \"Have you seen Thumbelina, how can I find her?\"
>> CORRECT.
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