If you are to be assigned to plan activities for a team building, what certain activities will you i

2026-07-06 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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I think it will include activities to get close to others. Because it seems that getting to know people will create communication skills and cooperation necessary for team activites. A few days ago, I participated in a consultation that I had to do, and at that time, I did an activity to get close to other people, and telepathically deduced the number cards we each ahd and lined up. When I did the activities, I didn\'t feel too much pressure and naturally got the effect of talking to people, so I thought it would be good to do this. So, I think I\'ll make sure to put in a game or activity where I can get close to other people, like the game I\'ve played.

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Hi! 

Thank you so much for submitting your homework to me. Great job! 
I just did some corrections too. ^^

~ Teacher Gina 


I think it will include activities to get close to others.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I think it\'s going to include activities that bring people closer together.

Because it seems that getting to know people will create communication skills and cooperation necessary for team activites.
>> Because getting to know each other helps develop the communication skills and cooperation needed for team activities.

A few days ago, I participated in a consultation that I had to do, and at that time, I did an activity to get close to other people, and telepathically deduced the number cards we each ahd and lined up. 
>> A few days ago, I participated in a consultation that I had to do, and at that time, I did an activity to get close to other people,  and telepathically deduced the number cards we each had and lined up. 
>> Or: A few days ago, I participated in a workshop where we did an icebreaker activity. We had to guess each other\'s number cards without speaking and line up in the correct order.

When I did the activities, I didn\'t feel too much pressure and naturally got the effect of talking to people, so I thought it would be good to do this.
>> When I did the activity, I didn\'t feel much pressure, and I naturally started talking to other people, so I thought it was a good activity.

So, I think I\'ll make sure to put in a game or activity where I can get close to other people, like the game I\'ve played.
>> CORRECT.
>> Ot: I would include an icebreaker game similar to the one I experienced.

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