In your opinion, is it better to live a longer life with some health risks or a shorter life with fe
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It was hard for me to choose. I would choose a shorter life with fewer risks. Worked in a hospital, I see so many patients suffering from severe illnesses. So, I find it that life is too short for me. As long as I am alive, I want to do anything.
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Hi, Susan!
Thank you for doing your homework. It’s nice that working at a hospital has made you appreciate life more and want to make the most out of it!
-T. Caitlyn
It was hard for me to choose.
>> CORRECT
I would choose a shorter life with fewer risks.
>> CORRECT
Worked in a hospital, I see so many patients suffering from severe illnesses.
>> Working in a hospital, I see many patients suffering from severe illnesses.
So, I find it that life is too short for me.
>> So, I feel that life is too short.
As long as I am alive, I want to do anything.
>> As long as I am alive, I want to do everything I can.
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