In your opinion, is it healthier to work under pressure or to work in a stress-free environment?
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Your answer clearly expresses your opinion and provides thoughtful reasoning, especially when you discussed how workplace relationships can be more stressful than workload itself. The comparison about not being able to choose coworkers, like parents, is strong and makes your argument more relatable and engaging. Your ideas are logical and well-organized, moving from personal opinion to broader workplace dynamics. To improve, focus on natural phrasing, plural forms (e.g., \"people\" instead of \"human\"), and smoother transitions between ideas. Overall, your response is insightful, realistic, and clearly communicates your perspective, great job!
-Teacher Wela
Stress from work is nothing actually.
>> Work-related stress is not always harmful.
Rather, it makes you challenged.
>> Rather, it can make you feel challenged.
The most stressful thing is always caused by human. It makes people crazy.
>> The most stressful situations are often caused by people, and this can make work very difficult.
It\'s a good luck to meet good people in your work.
>> It is good luck to meet supportive people at work.
You cannot choose people who you work with, like you cannot choose your parents.
>> You cannot choose the people you work with, just like you cannot choose your parents.
So, I think it\'s important to keep trying to make a good work environment all together.
>> So, I think it is important to keep trying to create a good work environment together.
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