In your opinion, is it healthier to work under pressure or to work in a stress-free environment?
학생이 쓴 원문
Working under pressure is not good for health.
It could cause mental health problem.
Many people suffer by psychiatry diseases now a day because heavy pressure.
강사 첨삭
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>> Working under pressure is not good for your health.
It could cause mental health problem.
>> It can cause mental health problems.
Many people suffer by psychiatry diseases now a day because heavy pressure.
>> Many people suffer from mental illnesses nowadays because of excessive pressure.
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