Is it better for children to grow up in a big family or a small family? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Recently, I feel like smaller family is better. When you\'re an only a child, you can have more things for yourself. It costs a lot of money to grow up for children.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Susan!
I agree! In the current economy, where everything is expensive, I think having just one child is enough unless you have the means to support more.
- T. Caitlyn
Recently, I feel like smaller family is better.
>> Recently, I feel like a smaller family is better.
When you\'re an only a child, you can have more things for yourself.
>> When you\'re an only child, you can have more things for yourself.
It costs a lot of money to grow up for children.
>> It costs a lot of money to raise children.
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