Is it more important to be fashionable or comfortable when choosing clothes? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think it depends the place where we go. If we go to official appointments such as wedding or company meeting, we should avoid to ware comfortable clothes. Although waring clothes which we want is free of ourselves, the clothes which don\'t match with environments sometimes can be regarded as rude attitude. However, except these special cases, which clothes we choose is depending on personal preference. Nobody don\'t have right to point out your outfit.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Mary! Your answer shows clear reasoning and a balanced perspective between fashion and comfort. I like how you considered social context, such as formal events versus casual situations, which makes your argument practical and realistic. Your conclusion about personal freedom also gives your response a strong closing idea. To improve, focus on grammar accuracy (especially negatives like “nobody has”), word choice like “wearing,” and smoother sentence structures. Overall, your response is thoughtful, well-organized, and easy to understand, great job!
-Teacher Wela
I think it depends the place where we go.
>> I think it depends on the place where we go.
If we go to official appointments such as wedding or company meeting, we should avoid to ware comfortable clothes.
>> If we go to formal events such as weddings or company meetings, we should avoid wearing overly casual clothes.
Although waring clothes which we want is free of ourselves, the clothes which don\'t match with environments sometimes can be regarded as rude attitude.
>> Although wearing the clothes we want is our personal freedom, clothes that do not match the environment can sometimes be seen as rude.
However, except these special cases, which clothes we choose is depending on personal preference.
>> However, except for these special cases, the clothes we choose depend on personal preference.
Nobody don\'t have right to point out your outfit.
>> Nobody has the right to point out your outfit.
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