Is it okay for different people to have different religions?
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I think having a different religions is really dangerous for a couple.
I saw many couple that break their relation before married because of only religion.
There are many type of problems, I think Christians Make a lot of problem.
First, Some Christians wants to go to the church with wife or husband. Even if they not have a religion or believe other religion.
Second, all Christian need to donate to church their ten percent of income. That is a common rule but not forced.
But some people who having a strong religion donate their income and add another donation for church.
If my wife has a that mind, our relation will be break. I always respect that believe a God and some religion but I can\'t understand it.
At the result, believing a same religion is really important when we meet a our partner.
Having a same religion helps reduce fight and argument.
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Hi, Joon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. Camille
I think having a different religions is really dangerous for a couple.
>> I think having different religions is really dangerous for a couple.
I saw many couple that break their relation before married because of only religion.
>> I saw many couples that break their relationship before getting married only because of religion.
There are many type of problems, I think Christians make a lot of problem.
>> CORRECT!
First, some Christians wants to go to the church with wife or husband. >> First, some Christians want to go to church with wife or husband.
Even if they not have a religion or believe other religion.
>> Even if they do not have a religion or believe in other religions.
Second, all Christian need to donate to church their ten percent of income.
>> Second, all Christian need to donate ten percent of their income to the church.
That is a common rule but not forced.
>> CORRECT!
But some people who having a strong religion donate their income and add another donation for church.
>> But some people with strong faith donate their income and add another donation for the church.
If my wife has a that mind, our relation will be break.
>> If my wife has that kind of mindset, our relationship might break.
I always respect that believe a God and some religion but I can\'t understand it.
>> I always respect that people believe in God and have some religions, but I can\'t understand it.
At the result, believing a same religion is really important when we meet a our partner.
>> As a result, believing in the same religion is really important when we meet our partners.
Having a same religion helps reduce fight and argument.
>> Having the same religion helps reduce fights and arguments.
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