Is it okay to end a friendship if your friend changes?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think we can be changed along our life and it can effects on personality, but nature usually don\'t be changed. For example, if I have a friend who I met in the middle school, we went through several life period such as high school, university, getting a job, and marriage. As we experienced these periods, we may be changed because personality is depends on our environment. However, I think friendship still exist whenever our environment changed, if there isn\'t any illegal issue.
강사 첨삭
Mary, your answer presents a thoughtful and mature view of friendship. I like how you distinguish between changes in personality and a person\'s basic nature, which adds depth to your argument. The example of friends growing together through different life stages makes your explanation realistic and relatable. To improve, focus on verb forms (change instead of be changed), subject-verb agreement (friendship still exists), and more natural expressions such as stages of life and harmful behaviors. Overall, your response is reflective, well-reasoned, and supported by a strong example, great job!
-Teacher Wela
I think we can be changed along our life and it can effects on personality, but nature usually don\'t be changed.
>> I think we can change throughout our lives, and our experiences can affect our personalities, but our basic nature usually does not change.
For example, if I have a friend who I met in the middle school, we went through several life period such as high school, university, getting a job, and marriage.
>> For example, if I have a friend whom I met in middle school, we may go through several stages of life, such as high school, university, getting a job, and marriage.
As we experienced these periods, we may be changed because personality is depends on our environment.
>> As we experience these periods, we may change because our personalities are influenced by our environment.
However, I think friendship still exist whenever our environment changed, if there isn\'t any illegal issue.
>> However, I think friendship can still exist even when our environment changes, as long as there are no serious problems or harmful behaviors.
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