Is traditional cooking more valuable than modern, technology-based cooking? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Value is not high skill only, but also include historical meaning.
I agree the technology of cooking has been developing a lot, however I think traditional cooking is still valuable.
It is roots for modern cooking.
강사 첨삭
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Value is not high skill only, but also include historical meaning.
>> Value is not only about skill; it also includes historical significance.
I agree the technology of cooking has been developing a lot, however I think traditional cooking is still valuable.
>> I agree that cooking technology has developed significantly. However, I think traditional cooking is still valuable.
It is roots for modern cooking.
>> It is the foundation of modern cooking.
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