List three foods that you\'d like to eat at a picnic and explain why.
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to eat tteokbokki , ham sandwich and kimbap.
Because spicy tteokbokki and kimbap is great food to meal.
Ham sandwich is delicious treats!~~:]
강사 첨삭
List three foods that you\\\'d like to eat at a picnic and explain why.
I want to eat tteokbokki , ham sandwich and kimbap. Because spicy tteokbokki and kimbap is great food to meal.
>> I want to eat tteokbokki, a ham sandwich, and kimbap because spicy tteokbokki and kimbap make great meals.
>> I want to eat tteokbokki, a ham sandwich, and kimbap because spicy tteokbokki and kimbap make great meals.
Ham sandwich is delicious treats!~~:]
>> A ham sandwich is a delicious treat.
Wow! I love tteokbokki too, but I hope it’s not too spicy. A cheesy bacon sandwich is good too.
Let’s go on a picnic! Yay! ^^~
Let’s go on a picnic! Yay! ^^~
- Elly~
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