Living with my dog
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While we are living in the current building as a tenant, our family is always careful about going out and in with my dog. About less than a month after we moved here, the owner and other tenants complained about my dog\'s smell. Actually, as everyone has their own body odor, all dogs have the body odor. But my dog has less odor than any other dog because Jindo breeds usually has less odor and we regularly give my dog a bath. Probably before we moved, they haven\'t experienced some tenants with a pet. Or they are a little sensitive to odor. Anyway, as soon as we heard of their complaint, we spray deodorant and air freshener around the front door.
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Hello, Gi [이름]!
It’s my first time hearing that you received complaints about your dog. It must be really stressful for you to hear those, but it’s a good thing that you’re trying your best to do something about it. I think it will take a lot of adjustment for you since, before, you didn’t have to worry about complaints because it was your own house.
- T. Caitlyn
While we are living in the current building as a tenant, our family is always careful about going out and in with my dog.
>> While we are living in the current building as tenants, our family is always careful about going in and out with my dog.
About less than a month after we moved here, the owner and other tenants complained about my dog\'s smell.
>> Less than a month after we moved here, the owner and other tenants complained about my dog\'s smell.
Actually, as everyone has their own body odor, all dogs have the body odor.
>> Actually, just as everyone has their own body odor, all dogs have their own body odor.
But my dog has less odor than any other dog because Jindo breeds usually has less odor and we regularly give my dog a bath.
>> But my dog has less odor than most other dogs because Jindo breeds usually have less odor, and we regularly give my dog a bath.
Probably before we moved, they haven\'t experienced some tenants with a pet.
>> Probably before we moved in, they hadn\'t experienced tenants with pets.
Or they are a little sensitive to odor.
>> CORRECT
Anyway, as soon as we heard of their complaint, we spray deodorant and air freshener around the front door.
>> Anyway, as soon as we heard about their complaint, we sprayed deodorant and air freshener around the front door.
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