Long Weekend Plan
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If I had a chance to spend long weekend, I would do my hobbies. I like crafting things with clay and usually it takes long time because we have to dry it or it has have multiple steps to do it. So I will make something at first day and let it dry until second day and I will paint and coat it and while it dries on third day I will hang out with my family. I think the best way to enjoy long weekend is to do what we wanted to do but the one that took long time and spend some tome with family
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>>If I had a chance to spend a long weekend, I would do my hobbies.
OR>>If I had a long weekend, I would pursue my hobbies.
I like crafting things with clay and usually it takes long time because we have to dry it or it has have multiple steps to do it.
I like crafting things with clay and usually it takes long time because we have to dry it or it has have multiple steps to do it.
>>I like crafting things with clay, and usually it takes a long time because we have to dry it or it has multiple steps to do it.
OR>>I like crafting things with clay, and it usually takes a long time because we have to dry it or it involves multiple steps.
So I will make something at first day and let it dry until second day and I will paint and coat it and while it dries on third day I will hang out with my family.
So I will make something at first day and let it dry until second day and I will paint and coat it and while it dries on third day I will hang out with my family.
>>So I will make something on the first day and let it dry until the second day, and I will paint and coat it, and while it dries on the third day, I will hang out with my family.
OR>>So I will make something on the first day, let it dry until the second day, paint and coat it, and while it dries on the third day, I will hang out with my family.
I think the best way to enjoy long weekend is to do what we wanted to do but the one that took long time and spend some tome with family.
>>I think the best way to enjoy a long weekend is to do what we wanted to do, and spend some time with family.
OR>>The best way to enjoy a long weekend is to do what we wanted to do, but that would probably last for a long time, and spend some time with family.
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