loss of our values
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I am very confused these issues like same-sex couples.
I don\'t want to recognize same-sex families as a family type.
I think that in terms of family is wide relationship including parents and unborn children.
People seem say the word of faimly too easily and lightly.
Family should have big responsibility and morality.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]^^
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
I understand your frustration.
_T. SHAY^^
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I am very confused these issues like same-sex couples.
>> I am very confused about issues like same-sex couples.
OR: I find issues involving same-sex quite confusing.
I don\'t want to recognize same-sex families as a family type.
>>I don\'t want to recognize same-sex families as a type of family.
OR: I don\'t personally recognize same-sex families as a family structure.
I think that in terms of family is wide relationship including parents and unborn children.
>>I think that a family is a broad relationship that includes parents and unborn children.
OR: I believe that a family is a broader social unit that includes parents and children, including unborn children.
People seem say the word of faimly too easily and lightly.
>>People seem to use the word \"family\" too easily and lightly.
OR: In my view, people frequently apply the term \"family\" too broadly and casually.
Family should have big responsibility and morality.
>>A family should have a strong sense of responsibility and morality
OR: A family should embody a strong sense of responsibility and moral integrity.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
I understand your frustration.
_T. SHAY^^
***
I am very confused these issues like same-sex couples.
>> I am very confused about issues like same-sex couples.
OR: I find issues involving same-sex quite confusing.
I don\'t want to recognize same-sex families as a family type.
>>I don\'t want to recognize same-sex families as a type of family.
OR: I don\'t personally recognize same-sex families as a family structure.
I think that in terms of family is wide relationship including parents and unborn children.
>>I think that a family is a broad relationship that includes parents and unborn children.
OR: I believe that a family is a broader social unit that includes parents and children, including unborn children.
People seem say the word of faimly too easily and lightly.
>>People seem to use the word \"family\" too easily and lightly.
OR: In my view, people frequently apply the term \"family\" too broadly and casually.
Family should have big responsibility and morality.
>>A family should have a strong sense of responsibility and morality
OR: A family should embody a strong sense of responsibility and moral integrity.
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