My bucket list?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think I don\'t have my bucket list. That\'s why if I had something I wanted to do, I did as soon as possible, there might be no reason to be delayed. But if someone asked me \"where do you want to travel?\", I have an answer, \"I want to travel to Cuba\", I wonder the people, the life styles, the cultures, and the scenery of the city etc, that means I\'m still interested in all of unique things in that country. Once I prepared the trip to Cuba with some of my friends, but we gave up since the political situation of that country was bad. Could it be my bucket list? I don\'t think so. Because I would never try hard to travel to Cuba, but if I would get an opportunity for it, I would not hesitate and leave to Cuba with joy. Traveling to Cuba is like my unfinished plan not my bucket list, that\'s all. Do people call this a bucket list?
강사 첨삭
Hi!
Nice work! Your ideas are clear- I just adjusted some grammar and phrasing to sound more natural in English. ^^
Also, regarding your question, I think that traveling to Cuba, as you have mentioned, is indeed more of an unfinished plan than a bucket list. A bucket list is a list of things you strongly want to do or experience in your life. ^^
~ Teacher Gina
Also, regarding your question, I think that traveling to Cuba, as you have mentioned, is indeed more of an unfinished plan than a bucket list. A bucket list is a list of things you strongly want to do or experience in your life. ^^
~ Teacher Gina
I think I don\'t have my bucket list.
>> CORRECT.
That\'s why if I had something I wanted to do, I did as soon as possible, there might be no reason to be delayed.
>> That’s why, when I have something I want to do, I do it as soon as possible because there’s no reason to delay it.
But if someone asked me \"where do you want to travel?\", I have an answer, \"I want to travel to Cuba\", I wonder the people, the life styles, the cultures, and the scenery of the city etc, that means I\'m still interested in all of unique things in that country.
>> But if someone asked me, “Where do you want to travel?” I would answer, “I want to travel to Cuba.” I’m curious about the people, the lifestyle, the culture, and the scenery, which means I’m still interested in the unique things in that country.
Once I prepared the trip to Cuba with some of my friends, but we gave up since the political situation of that country was bad.
>> I once planned a trip to Cuba with some of my friends, but we gave up because the political situation was bad.
Could it be my bucket list? I don\'t think so.
>> CORRECT.
Because I would never try hard to travel to Cuba, but if I would get an opportunity for it, I would not hesitate and leave to Cuba with joy.
>> Because I wouldn’t try very hard to travel to Cuba, but if I were to get the opportunity, I wouldn’t hesitate to go there.
Traveling to Cuba is like my unfinished plan, not my bucket list, that\'s all.
>> CORRECT.
Do people call this a bucket list?
>> CORRECT.
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