My Chu[이름]k\'s plans
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'m going to help my mother for Chu[이름]k\'s cuisines.
We will make rice cake that name is songpyeon and many kinds of korean pancake name is jeon.
And all my family together go to our hometown on the day of Chu[이름]k.
강사 첨삭
This sounds fun! Enjoy making Songpyeon and Jeon! ^^
- Teacher Debbie
>> I\'m going to help my mother cook dishes for Chu[이름]k.
We will make rice cake that name is songpyeon and many kinds of korean pancake name is jeon.
We will make rice cake that name is songpyeon and many kinds of korean pancake name is jeon.
>> We will make rice cake that we call as Songpyeon and many kinds of Korean pancake called Jeon.
And all my family together go to our hometown on the day of Chu[이름]k.
And all my family together go to our hometown on the day of Chu[이름]k.
>> And all my family members go to our hometown on the day of Chu[이름]k.
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