My favorite summer activity is paddleboarding(SUP)
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My friends and I went to the beach to experience SUP(stand up paddle board) for free.It was very easy to enjoy and I decided to buy my own board. My board is inflatable, it means if I want to board it,I have to fill it with air using a hand pump.Some friends say \"you\'d better to just rent, it\'s cheap and you don\'t need to pump hardly\"But I don\'t think so. It\'s just the first step of enjoying the day.Once I float on the water,I feel calm and peaceful.The scenery of the beach from the ocean looks different as usual. When I went paddleboarding alone,there was nothing but small waves on the ocean, the feeling was amazing,but soon I scared being alone in the wild nature.I stood on the board and paddled with all my strength,even I was looking the beach and it took about just 20 minutes to get there.haha.In the summer I usually go to beach with my friends on weekends.I sometimes bring coffee and the camera.We drink coffee, chat and take pictures on the ocean.SUP make every summer special.
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Hi!
Thank you so much for submitting your homework.
It was nice to know about your favorite summer activity, which is SUP.
I enjoyed reading your composition as it reflects how fun it is really for you. ^^
I enjoyed reading your composition as it reflects how fun it is really for you. ^^
~ Teacher Gina
My friends and I went to the beach to experience SUP(stand up paddle board) for free.
>> CORRECT.
It was very easy to enjoy and I decided to buy my own board.
>> CORRECT.
My board is inflatable, it means if I want to board it,I have to fill it with air using a hand pump.
>> My board is inflatable, which means that if I want to use it, I have to fill it with air using a hand pump.
Some friends say \"you\'d better to just rent, it\'s cheap and you don\'t need to pump hardly\"But I don\'t think so.
>> Some friends say, “You’d better just rent one. It’s cheap, and you don’t need to pump it up hard.” But I don’t think so.
It\'s just the first step of enjoying the day.
>> CORRECT.
Once I float on the water,I feel calm and peaceful.
>> CORRECT.
The scenery of the beach from the ocean looks different as usual.
>> The scenery of the beach from the ocean looks different than usual.
When I went paddleboarding alone,there was nothing but small waves on the ocean, the feeling was amazing,but soon I scared being alone in the wild nature.
>> When I went paddleboarding alone, there was nothing but small waves on the ocean. The feeling was amazing, but soon I became scared of being alone in the wild nature.
I stood on the board and paddled with all my strength,even I was looking the beach and it took about just 20 minutes to get there.haha.
>> I stood on the board and paddled with all my strength while looking at the beach, and it took only about 20 minutes to get there. Haha.
In the summer I usually go to beach with my friends on weekends.
>> In the summer, I usually go to the beach with my friends on weekends.
I sometimes bring coffee and the camera.
>> CORRECT.
We drink coffee, chat and take pictures on the ocean.
>> CORRECT.
SUP make every summer special.
>> CORRECT.
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