my personality
학생이 쓴 원문
i used to be mentioned as a quite and pacient person by people. I like to read and write better than talk with people.
I think I can easily satirfied with myself. That makes me to be positive in many times. I think that is the best trait.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Mi-O! I like how you describe yourself. You sound calm, thoughtful, and self-aware. It’s great that you’re comfortable with who you are and stay positive most of the time. ^^ Thank you for doing your homework. Have a great day!
~T. Jewel
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i used to be mentioned as a quite and pacient person by people.
>>I used to be described as a quiet and patient person.
OR
>>People used to describe me as a quiet and patient person.
>>People used to describe me as a quiet and patient person.
I like to read and write better than talk with people.
>>I like reading and writing better than talking with people.
OR
>>I prefer reading and writing to talking with people.
>>I prefer reading and writing to talking with people.
I think I can easily satirfied with myself.
>>I’m easily satisfied with myself.
OR
>>I\'m happy with who I am.
>>I\'m happy with who I am.
That makes me to be positive in many times.
>>That makes me feel positive most of the time.
I think that is the best trait.
>>I think that is my best trait.
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