My techniques to help me to s[이름]p well.
학생이 쓴 원문
I often have trouble in s[이름]p at morning because I allways work at night.
So I take a shower with warm water and drink a warm cup of milk to s[이름]p well before I s[이름]p.
If I can not s[이름]p after I did these things. Finally I listen ASMR. It makes me feel comfortable and s[이름]p well.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]. It was a pleasure reading your composition once again. It\'s interesting to find out your techniques in s[이름]ping. Thank you for sharing that. I\'ll talk to you in class. ~ teacher Jane ^^
>>> My techniques to help me s[이름]p well.
OR >>> The techniques I use to s[이름]p well.
I often have trouble in s[이름]p at morning because I allways work at night.
>>> I often have trouble s[이름]ping in the morning because I always work at night.
>>> I often have trouble s[이름]ping in the morning because I always work at night.
So I take a shower with warm water and drink a warm cup of milk to s[이름]p well before I s[이름]p.
>>> So I take a shower with warm water and drink a warm cup of milk before going to bed.
>>> So I take a shower with warm water and drink a warm cup of milk before going to bed.
If I can not s[이름]p after I did these things. Finally I listen ASMR.
>>> If I cannot s[이름]p after I did these things, I would finally listen to ASMR.
It makes me feel comfortable and s[이름]p well.
>>> CORRECT =)
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