namely in spring
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Because of its fragrant scent and a little bitter taste, people like herbs in spring. Naengi, mugwort, dallae, chives, and water parsley are some of the most popular spring herbs in Korea. Some people appreciate these spring herbs or vegetables because they have good nutrients for our health. Some believe that some spring herbs have strong vitality that survive through severe cold winter. Through consuming the herbs, they think that they can improve their.immunity
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
It\'s nice to know that people in Korea look forward to eating spring herbs and are thinking about how healthy they are for them. It\'s nice that people can appreciate these herbs and continuously eat them!
- T. Caitlyn
Because of its fragrant scent and a little bitter taste, people like herbs in spring.
>> Because of their fragrant scent and slightly bitter taste, people like herbs in spring.
Naengi, mugwort, dallae, chives, and water parsley are some of the most popular spring herbs in Korea.
>> CORRECT
Some people appreciate these spring herbs or vegetables because they have good nutrients for our health.
>> Some people appreciate these spring herbs and vegetables because they are nutritious and good for our health.
Some believe that some spring herbs have strong vitality that survive through severe cold winter.
>> Some believe that certain spring herbs have strong vitality that allows them to survive the severe cold of winter.
Through consuming the herbs, they think that they can improve their.immunity
>> By consuming these herbs, they believe they can improve their immunity.
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