Perfume and confidence
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, it is. Perfumes that are not excessive are enough to win people\'s favor, and people who wear perfumes become more confident in themselves.
강사 첨삭
Yes, it is.
>> CORRECT
Perfumes that are not excessive are enough to win people\'s favor, and people who wear perfumes become more confident in themselves.
>> Perfumes that are not too strong are often enough to win people’s favor, and people who wear perfume tend to feel more confident.
OR >> Subtle perfumes are often enough to gain people’s favor, and wearing perfume can boost a person’s confidence.
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