Pet\'s contribution to human\'s well-being
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Pets, regardless of the kinds of animals, play a key role in people\'s well-being physically and mentally. The elderly or young people,who live alone, raise cats or dogs in Korea and they relieve their loneliness through their pets. Taking care of pets helps them be more active and social in Korea. Through various social networks, pet owners exchange some useful information and share their experiences. They also get a big happiness or stability with pets.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
I think this kind of effect from pets applies all over the world, so people really want to take care of pets despite the difficulties, because of the comfort they provide. It\'s also nice to know that in Korea, there are social networks which can contribute to the social interaction of people.
- T. Caitlyn
Pets, regardless of the kinds of animals, play a key role in people\'s well-being physically and mentally.
>> CORRECT
The elderly or young people who live alone, raise cats or dogs in Korea and they relieve their loneliness through their pets.
>> CORRECT
Taking care of pets helps them be more active and social in Korea.
>> Taking care of pets helps them become more active and social in Korea.
Through various social networks, pet owners exchange some useful information and share their experiences.
>> CORRECT
They also get a big happiness or stability with pets.
>> They also gain great happiness and stability from their pets.
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