Please feedback my Bu[이름]ess mail

2019-10-23 · 첨삭 강사 Annie

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I have to send bu[이름]ess mail at work until tomorrow. Let me know if there are any errors in the e-mail contents. 6053 Tri-leg Cane Chair, 604 Quad Cane are products name. I already gave them first quotation 3 products, I want to know additional item\'s price ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Dear [Name], Thank you for your prompt reply. I ask you again to give a quotation of 2000pcs (T43-6063 , 608SW-9032-2 , MS606-PU) We would like to request for an estimate on below product as well. 1. 6053 Tri-leg Cane Chair 1000pcs / 2000pcs 2. 604 Quad Cane 1000pcs / 2000pcs We are looking for High quality and reasonably priced cane. Could we print our logo on the cane? Also Let me know which is main product of your company. Best Regards, [이름]

강사 첨삭

Good evening Ji[이름],

Please check the following correction (the one written in red color).

I hope this helps. Thanks and see you next time.

[이름]cerely,

Teacher Annie

Dear [Name],

Thank you for your prompt reply.

I ask you again to give a quotation of 2000pcs (T43-6063 , 608SW-9032-2 , MS606-PU)

>>> CORRECT

We would like to request for an estimate on below product as well.

>>>Also, we would like to request for an estimate on the following products:

1. 6053 Tri-leg Cane Chair 1000pcs / 2000pcs

2. 604 Quad Cane 1000pcs / 2000pcs

We are looking for High quality and reasonably priced cane.

>>> We are looking for high quality product with a reasonable price cane.

Could we print our logo on the cane?

>>> CORRECT

Also Let me know which is main product of your company.

>>> Let me know which is the main product of your company.

Best Regards,
Ji[이름] Shin

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