shame
학생이 쓴 원문
What a full-time child!
The word includes the meaning of many social phenomenon sadly.
If we recognize that the real difficult situation of young generation, it is very serious lethargic and unhealthy culture.
I think that full-time adults don\'t want to indendent life for themselves.
We should know what is the most important reason. They make several excuses and blame on society itself instead of themselves.
We are raising our children as spoiled adult.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Ms. [이름]!
I understand your point. Do you agree that parents play a role in this kind of situation? For example, an adult child may not want to keep a job and eventually quits because of the way he or she was raised. Thank you for this response, I enjoye reading your thoughts.
Aki~
What a full-time child!
>> CORRECT!
The word includes the meaning of many social phenomenon sadly.
>>> The word \"sadly \" reflects many social issues in our society.
If we recognize that the real difficult situation of young generation, it is very serious lethargic and unhealthy culture.
>> If we recognize the difficult reality facing the younger generation, we can see that this culture of lethargy is a serious and unhealthy problem.
I think that full-time adults don\'t want to indendent life for themselves.
>> I think many adults with full-time jobs still do not want to live independently.
We should know what is the most important reason. They make several excuses and blame on society itself instead of themselves.
>> We should understand the root cause of the problem. Instead of taking responsibility for themselves, some people make excuses and blame society.
We are raising our children as spoiled adult.
>> We are raising our children to become spoiled adults.
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