Should families have traditions? Why are they important?
학생이 쓴 원문
Family traditions are necessary because they become support when we are tough time and help as a shelter.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Susan!
You are right! Having traditions can make a family closer and serve as a way to build better and stronger relationships with each other.
- T. Caitlyn
Family traditions are necessary because they become support when we are tough time and help as a shelter.
>> Family traditions are necessary because they become a source of support when we are going through tough times and help us feel sheltered.
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