Should get-togethers be planned or more spontaneous? Why?
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It\'s hard to get together, so we need to plan ahead. This is because everyone is busy. The larger the gathering, the more carefully it needs to plan.
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Hello, Susan!
You\'re right! The schedules of the attendees of gatherings are something we really need to consider when planning one, so I agree with you that it should be planned well.
- T. Caitlyn
It\'s hard to get together, so we need to plan ahead.
>> CORRECT
This is because everyone is busy.
>> CORRECT
The larger the gathering, the more carefully it needs to plan.
>> The larger the gathering, the more carefully it needs to be planned.
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