Should people change major life decisions because of climate change? Why or why not?

2026-06-26 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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I believe people should change major life decisions because of climate change due to its impact on contemporary occupations. As climate change is centered as the most serious global issue, a lot of people have began to notice the importance of establishing new conservative or ESG organizations for the future generation. As a result, directing one\'s career path based on the necessity for the next generation could be an example of the climate change\'s impact on our lives\' decision.

강사 첨삭

Su A,

Thanks for sharing your thoughts here.

Speak to you later.

T. Ash

1. I believe people should change major life decisions because of climate change due to its impact on contemporary occupations.

>> I believe people should make major life decisions because of climate change due to its impact on modern occupations.

2. As climate change is centered as the most serious global issue, a lot of people have began to notice the importance of establishing new conservative or ESG organizations for the future generation.

>> As climate change is considered the most serious global issue, a lot of people have begun to notice the importance of establishing environmental standards and ESG practices for future generation.

3. As a result, directing one\'s career path based on the necessity for the next generation could be an example of the climate change\'s impact on our lives\' decision.

>> As a result, choosing a career path based on the necessity for the next generation could be an example of the impact of climate change on our life decisions.

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