Should restaurants have the right to refuse solo customers?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, i agree that restaurants have the right to rufuse solo customers.
These days, we are living in a captalism era.
So everyone has the rights to behave freely within the laws.
Moreover, the owners of the restaurant also can have the right to accept some customers and refuse some customers.
But they have to be responsible for their behaviors.
If the sales deceases because of their policy refusing solo customers, they should accept the results.
In that cases, they maybe change their mind to open for every customer.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Serena!
Good job presenting your opinion clearly and logically. You explained your idea step by step, and your argument is easy to follow. I also like that you considered both freedom and responsibility, which makes your writing more balanced and thoughtful.
Your ideas are strong and well-organized. Just keep practicing smoother word choices and natural expressions, and your writing will sound even more polished.
Overall, this is a clear and well-developed opinion.
~Teacher Polly
Yes, i agree that restaurants have the right to rufuse solo customers.
>>Yes, I agree that restaurants have the right to refuse solo customers.
These days, we are living in a captalism era.
>>These days, we are living in a capitalist era.
So everyone has the rights to behave freely within the laws.
>>So everyone has the right to behave freely within the law.
Moreover, the owners of the restaurant also can have the right to accept some customers and refuse some customers.
>>Moreover, restaurant owners also have the right to accept some customers and refuse others.
But they have to be responsible for their behaviors.
>>But they have to be responsible for their actions.
If the sales deceases because of their policy refusing solo customers, they should accept the results.
>>If sales decrease because of their policy of refusing solo customers, they should accept the results.
In that cases, they maybe change their mind to open for every customer.
>>In that case, they may change their minds and open their doors to every customer.
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