Should schools or companies have more holidays? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
School already have many holidays, because there is summer and winter vacation.
However, company is not.
Employees also need long vacation.
강사 첨삭
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School already have many holidays, because there is summer and winter vacation.
>> Schools already have many holidays because of summer and winter vacations.
However, company is not. Employees also need long vacation.
>> However, companies do not. Employees also need long vacations.
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