Social image and personal taste for perfume
학생이 쓴 원문
I think I put more emphasis on social images. There are quite a few people who care about me that others see, and perfume is usually worn often in everyday situations, but more often in public situations. So I take care of social images more.
강사 첨삭
I think I put more emphasis on social images.
>> CORRECT
There are quite a few people who care about me that others see, and perfume is usually worn often in everyday situations, but more often in public situations.
>> There are quite a few people who care about how others see me, and perfume is usually worn in everyday situations, but more often in public.
So I take care of social images more.
>> So I pay more attention to my social image.
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