the atmosphere of a cafe
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I think the atmosphere of a cafe is as important as the taste of the food or drinks. And the atmosphere is dependent on the design and interior of a cafe. I like a cozy and comfortable mood better than fancy and colorful mood. I also think the price is an important factor to choose a cafe.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
I miss reading your homework! I agree with you! Nowadays, a lot of cafes focus on their atmosphere because it attracts young people to visit them. However, I believe that the taste of the food and drinks should also be a priority so they can gain loyal customers.
- T. Caitlyn
I think the atmosphere of a cafe is as important as the taste of the food or drinks.
>> CORRECT
And the atmosphere is dependent on the design and interior of a cafe.
>> The atmosphere depends on the design and interior of a cafe.
I like a cozy and comfortable mood better than fancy and colorful mood.
>> I prefer a cozy and comfortable atmosphere to a fancy and colorful one.
I also think the price is an important factor to choose a cafe.
>> I also think the price is an important factor when choosing a cafe.
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