the fancy restaurant
학생이 쓴 원문
I like going fancy restaurant. I usually feel very kind and comfortable when i visit there.
but i do not go fancy restaurant very frequently. there are some reasons below
first, they usually serve the food for a long time. but i prefer to eat the meal within an hour. Eating for a long time is very boring to me.
second, I enjoy eating Korean traditional food, but most of fancy restaurants are about French and Italian food.
Lastly, they are usually very expensive.
That\'s why I just visit the fancy restaurant when I need to visit.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Mi O! That makes sense. It sounds like you prefer quick meals and Korean food, so fancy restaurants don’t really match your everyday style. ^^ But it’s nice that you still go sometimes when you need to. ^^ Thank you for sharing your thoughts about fancy restaurants. Have a good day!
~T. Jewel
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>>I like going to fancy restaurants.
OR
>>I enjoy going to fancy restaurants.
I usually feel very kind and comfortable when i visit there.
>>I usually feel very relaxed and comfortable when I visit there.
but i do not go fancy restaurant very frequently.
but i do not go fancy restaurant very frequently.
>>But I don’t go to fancy restaurants very often.
there are some reasons below
>>Here are some reasons.
first, they usually serve the food for a long time
>>First, the food usually takes a long time to be served.
but i prefer to eat the meal within an hour.
>>But I prefer to finish my meal within an hour.
Eating for a long time is very boring to me.
>>Eating for a long time is very boring for me.
OR
>>I find eating for a long time very boring.
second, I enjoy eating Korean traditional food, but most of fancy restaurants are about French and Italian food.
>>I find eating for a long time very boring.
second, I enjoy eating Korean traditional food, but most of fancy restaurants are about French and Italian food.
>>Second, I enjoy eating Korean traditional food, but most fancy restaurants serve French and Italian food.
Lastly, they are usually very expensive.
Lastly, they are usually very expensive.
>>CORRECT
That\'s why I just visit the fancy restaurant when I need to visit.
That\'s why I just visit the fancy restaurant when I need to visit.
>>That’s why I only visit fancy restaurants when I need to.
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