The protest
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The protest and request has a bad effect on both Samsung\'s public image and its labor union. Unlike the past, many Korean people think that the union\'s argument or request is excessive. Some people even criticize that unions of big companies are deteriorated into selfish and patrician unions. This protest has worse impact on the union members.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
I understand and I agree! I also used to view labor unions as something essential to protect the welfare of employees, but you\'re right, nowadays, they seem selfish and greedy, always asking for more.
- T. Caitlyn
The protest and request has a bad effect on both Samsung\'s public image and its labor union.
>> The protest and request have a bad effect on both Samsung\'s public image and its labor union.
Unlike the past, many Korean people think that the union\'s argument or request is excessive.
>> CORRET
Some people even criticize that unions of big companies are deteriorated into selfish and patrician unions.
>> Some people even criticize how unions of big companies have deteriorated into selfish and patrician unions.
This protest has worse impact on the union members.
>> This protest has a worse impact on the union members.
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