This is my interview script. I want to know the breathing part

2026-06-04 · 첨삭 강사 Divina

학생이 쓴 원문

At the time of breathing. / Mark this Hello, I\'m [이름] Da-[이름], applying for the front desk position. I have two years of front desk experience at a hot spring hotel, where I took charge of check-in, check-out, and all hot spring duties. I also did field training at Signiel Busan and Lotte Hotel, where 1 learned luxury service standards in person I believe real experience is the best teacher - and I\'m ready to bring that to Banyan Tree\'s wellness-focused servic. Thank you. Working at a hot spring hotel got me interested in wellness. I think Banyan Tree has the clearest vision in that area. I also trained at Signiel and Lotte Hotel, so I know what luxury service looks like. I wanted to keep growing, and Banyan Tree Busan\'s opening was the right timing for me.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Gina! 

Pause/breathing time is dependent on your pace in speaking the sentences in English. The one I will send is the ideal pause times based on the text that you sent.

CORRECTED AND MARKED VERSION: 

/ = short pause (for breathing)
// = longer pause (sign to move to the next part)

Hello, / I\'m [이름] Da-[이름], / applying for the front desk position. //

I have two years of front desk experience at a hot spring hotel, / where I took charge of check-ins, / check-outs, / and all hot spring duties. // 
I also completed field training at Signiel Busan and Lotte Hotel, / where I learned luxury service standards firsthand. //

I believe real experience is the best teacher— / and I\'m ready to bring that to Banyan Tree\'s wellness-focused service. //

Working at a hot spring hotel got me interested in wellness, / and I believe Banyan Tree has the clearest vision in that area. //

I also trained at Signiel and Lotte Hotel, / so I know what luxury service looks and feels like. / I wanted to keep growing, / and Banyan Tree Busan\'s opening was the perfect timing for me. //

Thank you. //

Note: I would love to hear you practice this. You may do so in class, or send a recording of your voice via Zoom chat (if you\'re available)~

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