Trying is valuable just itself, no matter how was the result
학생이 쓴 원문
When I heard about the word \'try\', the first thing that comes to mind is that \'Trying is awesome and brilliant just itself.\' I believe trying something new or what you want will develop you up, no matter with the result. Sometimes trying can give the confidence and development but also it can give you the opposite things. However, I always believe that trying can give us lots of lessons. I also experienced failure after trying something and it makes me feel depressed and small, but eventually it made me stronger in multiple ways. This is why my life motto is \'No pain, no gain\'.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Melody!
Trying, even if it results in failure, frees you from the burden of \"what ifs,\" transforming potential regret into meaningful life experience, lessons, and progress.
Failure is a temporary setback, whereas not attempting at all results in persistent, long-term regret that lingers far longer than any unsuccessful attempt.
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__T. Mayleen :)
When I heard about the word \'try\', the first thing that comes to mind is that \'Trying is awesome and brilliant just itself.\'
>>> When I heard about the word \'try,\' the first thing that comes to mind is that \'trying is awesome and brilliant in itself.\'
I believe trying something new or what you want will develop you up, no matter with the result.
>>> I believe trying something new or what you want will develop you, no matter the result.
Sometimes trying can give the confidence and development but also it can give you the opposite things.
>>> Sometimes trying can give you confidence and development, but also it can give you the opposite things.
>>> OR: Trying can sometimes boost your confidence and progress, but it can also have the opposite effect.
However, I always believe that trying can give us lots of lessons.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: However, I always believe that trying can give us many lessons.
I also experienced failure after trying something and it makes me feel depressed and small, but eventually it made me stronger in multiple ways.
>>> I also experienced failure after trying something, and it made me feel depressed and small, but eventually it made me stronger in multiple ways.
This is why my life motto is \'No pain, no gain\'.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: This is why my life mantra is \'no pain, no gain.\'
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