Vices differ from country to country
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I\'m not sure that I correctly understand the meaning of \"vice\". Speaking of a habit be considered a vice, drinking alcohol can be a vice. In Korea, people are tolerant of alcohol except for drunk driving. Samgyeopsal(Korean grilled pork belly) and soju(Korean popular alcohol) are popular. Chicken and beer are too. It can be a guilty pleasure when you are on a diet or you\'er suffering from hangover the next morning by too much drinking at a social gathering. But usually we enjoy those food without any feeling of guilty or vice. I\'ve heard that Muslims differ from us. They ban pork and alcohol, so if someone eat pork and soju with Korean friends, it must be a vice. And Thailand allowed cannabis beverages, but Korea is one of the strictest countries over the world about drug. We are not allowed even one drop of cannabis, so cannabis beverage can be a common drink in Thailand, but as Korean, drinking cannabis beverages on the street is illegal and it is considered as a vice. Interesting!
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I truly appreciate your thoughts about vices. It was indeed interesting! ^^
~ Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I\'m not sure if I fully understand the meaning of “vice.”
Speaking of a habit be considered a vice, drinking alcohol can be a vice.
>> Speaking of habits that can be considered vices, drinking alcohol can be one.
In Korea, people are tolerant of alcohol except for drunk driving.
>> CORRECT.
Samgyeopsal(Korean grilled pork belly) and soju(Korean popular alcohol) are popular.
>> CORRECT.
Chicken and beer are too.
>> CORRECT.
It can be a guilty pleasure when you are on a diet or you\'er suffering from hangover the next morning by too much drinking at a social gathering.
>> It can feel like a guilty pleasure when you are on a diet or suffering from a hangover the next morning after drinking too much at a social gathering.
But usually we enjoy those food without any feeling of guilty or vice.
>> But usually, we enjoy those food without feeling guilty or thinking of them as a vice.
I\'ve heard that Muslims differ from us.
>> CORRECT,
They ban pork and alcohol, so if someone eat pork and soju with Korean friends, it must be a vice.
>> They ban pork and alcohol, so if someone eat pork, and soju with their Korean friends, it must be a vice.
And Thailand allowed cannabis beverages, but Korea is one of the strictest countries over the world about drug.
>> And Thailand allowed cannabis beverages, but Korea is one of the strictest countries in the world about drugs.
We are not allowed even one drop of cannabis, so cannabis beverage can be a common drink in Thailand, but as Korean, drinking cannabis beverages on the street is illegal and it is considered as a vice.
>> We are not allowed even one drop of cannabis, so cannabis beverages can be a common drink in Thailand, but as a Korean, drinking cannabis beverages on the street is illegal and it is considered a vice.
Interesting!
>> CORRECT.
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