violet's homework n.[휴대전화]?!

2018-08-14 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Did you go visit anyone this week? Did anyone come to visit your house this week? Please answer in complete sentences:nothing...........because its so hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

강사 첨삭

Hi Violet,


Thank you for doing your homework. ^^ Please take note of the corrections below.



HOMEWORK:


Did you go visit anyone this week?
 Did anyone come to visit your house this week?
 Please answer in complete sentences.



YOUR ANSWER:


nothing...........because its so hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



CORRECTIONS:



I did not visit anyone this week and no one came to visit our house either, because it\'s so hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



**  Violet dear, you need to answer in complete sentences, okay? I also corrected grammar. Bear in mind all of the corrections, alright? ^^ Thank you. ^^

Take care.



T. Alexia

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