violet's homework n.[휴대전화]?!
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
If you could make three wishes, what would they be? Answer in complete sentences:1.I want to be smart.
2.I want to use magic.
3.I want to be famous.
강사 첨삭
Hi Violet,
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^ Please take note of the corrections below.
HOMEWORK:
If you could make three wishes, what would they be? Answer in complete sentences.
YOUR ANSWER:
1.I want to be smart.
2.I want to use magic.
3.I want to be famous.
CORRECTIONS:
1. I want to be smart.
2. I want to use magic.
3. I want to be famous.
** Violet dear, you forgot again spacing. This time, it\'s between the numbers and the words. The good news is, you perfected the grammar, well done! No corrections, apart from the spacing. ^^ That\'s all. Thank you. ^^
Take care.
T. Alexia
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