What are the biggest challenges people face when changing careers?
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I worked at the previous company for six years. and i\'m working at currently company for about 2 years but I decided to become a cabin crew. Many people didn\'t understand so ask to me why you want to change your career? You have a decent job. but I thought if i would try a new challenges i\'ll regret my decision so whatever i want i gonna try that
강사 첨삭
Hello, Na[이름]! Your answer shows courage and self-reflection. Changing careers after spending many years in one field is a big decision, and your point about trying something new rather than regretting not trying it is very meaningful. Your personal experience makes your answer more interesting and relatable.
~T. Jenna
I worked at the previous company for six years.
>>I worked at my previous company for six years.
and i\'m working at currently company for about 2 years but I decided to become a cabin crew.
>>And I\'m working at my current company for about two years, but I decided to become a cabin crew member.
Many people didn\'t understand so ask to me why you want to change your career? You have a decent job.
>>Many people didn\'t understand, so they asked me, \"Why do you want to change your career?\"You have a decent job.
but I thought if i would try a new challenges i\'ll regret my decision so whatever i want i gonna try that.
>>But I thought that if I didn\'t try a new challenge, I would regret my decision, so I decided to try whatever I wanted to do.
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One of the biggest challenges people face when changing careers is leaving a stable job and stepping into an unfamiliar environment. Many people may also feel pressure from others because they might question why they want to change their career, especially if they already have a decent job. However, I believe that people sometimes need to take new challenges because they may regret it if they never try something they truly want to do. With courage and a willingness to learn, people can overcome these challenges and grow through new experiences.
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